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Rewind and Rethink by ~Unluckyshadow13:iconUnluckyshadow13:

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Now stop

Take it back a step
Rewind the moment

Lets try this again

Just think

Take a deep breath dear
Slow down to see

Try not to blink

Clear your head

Think back on the minute
See what I meant

Not just what I said

Regress

To the soft simple feelings
You know that you're feeling

Let yourself progress

Hold tight

Don't let slip my meaning
In this revelation

Grip it with all your might
©2008-2009 ~Unluckyshadow13
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A quick thing during Photo. As evident by the sheer amount of things posted during this time, it's obvious that we don't do much. But I digress.

For some reason, it's got a certain beat to it when I think it, which explains the italics.
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~PerfectKateKate:iconPerfectKateKate: Apr 9, 2008, 8:50:27 AM
I like it. I think this is my favorite of yours.

(By the way, it should be sheer, not shear.)
~Unluckyshadow13:iconUnluckyshadow13: Apr 9, 2008, 2:26:49 PM
*wanders off to go edit it quickly*

Thank ya kindly ma'am =]

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.
~Cristina-Corruptive:iconCristina-Corruptive: May 27, 2008, 12:32:49 PM
Ok im editing one of my previous comments to you. I absolutely adore this poem so much! It reminds me of my two beloved charecters so much...expecially in the part of the story I wrote the other day ^////^ It's making me smile, so you did good ^w^ :heartL

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98% of DA's Anime Fanbase =Yaoi Fangirls. if you don't give two shits about the statistics and just want to see two guys fuck madly, paste to your signature
YAOI: We don't want to BE with them, we want to WATCH them.
OMFG Iron Man!!! *SEIZURES*
~Unluckyshadow13:iconUnluckyshadow13: May 27, 2008, 2:46:49 PM
haha, thank you very much ^///^

I always like to hear when my work has some form of relevance.

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.
~Cristina-Corruptive:iconCristina-Corruptive: May 28, 2008, 5:47:55 AM
well your very welcome, cuz its hard to make me smile :heart: <--see I did it rite this tiem

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98% of DA's Anime Fanbase =Yaoi Fangirls. if you don't give two shits about the statistics and just want to see two guys fuck madly, paste to your signature
YAOI: We don't want to BE with them, we want to WATCH them.
OMFG Iron Man!!! *SEIZURES*
~Unluckyshadow13:iconUnluckyshadow13: May 28, 2008, 6:23:59 AM
Haha <3

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.
~Cristina-Corruptive:iconCristina-Corruptive: May 28, 2008, 7:28:35 AM
I accept your heart graciously even though it's not as collorfull as my own lol

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98% of DA's Anime Fanbase =Yaoi Fangirls. if you don't give two shits about the statistics and just want to see two guys fuck madly, paste to your signature
YAOI: We don't want to BE with them, we want to WATCH them.
OMFG Iron Man!!! *SEIZURES*
~Unluckyshadow13:iconUnluckyshadow13: May 28, 2008, 7:32:25 AM
:heart: There ^^

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.
~Cristina-Corruptive:iconCristina-Corruptive: May 28, 2008, 8:02:49 AM
Yay! *drowns in hearts* :heart: :heart:

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98% of DA's Anime Fanbase =Yaoi Fangirls. if you don't give two shits about the statistics and just want to see two guys fuck madly, paste to your signature
YAOI: We don't want to BE with them, we want to WATCH them.
OMFG Iron Man!!! *SEIZURES*
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